tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6755820785026826471.post513963355127477322..comments2024-03-27T18:22:33.294+05:30Comments on हिन्दीकुंज,Hindi Website/Literary Web Patrika: एक बदचलन गाना Hindikunjhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17430170217452544378noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6755820785026826471.post-59831986637929565962018-09-26T22:17:23.669+05:302018-09-26T22:17:23.669+05:30It's not that good. I think you're trying ...It's not that good. I think you're trying to copy Mridula Garg's style. Writing something and leaving in between ...the ending is not good. The whole story is pointless. It doesn't go anywhere, neither the beginning is sensible.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6755820785026826471.post-80749934665342432222015-09-19T21:15:21.540+05:302015-09-19T21:15:21.540+05:30बढ़ियाबढ़ियाजितेन्द़ भगतhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05422231552073966726noreply@blogger.com